This time I tried to loosen up a bit, and further reduced the elements in the painting. I added the clothes line because I like the �story� it tells of an Amish girl with a bright red dress. I added a horse and buggy, but the proportions are all wrong.�The sky is way to saturated, and the whites in the road feel like an afterthought. I overworked the grass, and it got pretty muddy. I do like the clouds-though the shadows don�t make sense with the Sun.