
So… my second year of watercolor is over. As an attempt to measure my progress, I decided a while ago that I would paint the Farm Road painting each year. Last year, the results were pretty remarkable. When I compared last years painting to the painting I made when I first started, I saw a whole bunch of progress. This years painting is a much more subtle change, maybe even a bit backward.
Here is the photo of the farm road:

Now, this isnt a particularly fabulous photo, but its the picture I tried to paint every day for a month when I first started.
Here is the first rendition I ever painted:

At least I havent gone backwards so much that Im that bad any more. I guess thats a good thing.
And heres the painting I made at the end of my first year:

Now, there are many things that I think I did correctly with this painting, and it is certainly much better than my first attempt in 2018. This version is much better as a composition, but in many ways I dont think its mine. I basically tailored a Joseph Zbukvic tutorial, and applied his techniques to this subject. I did make some dramatic improvements in the composition, but the painting doesnt feel like its my own. It also doesnt feel like its correctly lit. You can see the sun in the sky, so you know it should be morning or evening, but the light in the painting feels like its noon.
Its also hard to tell if the painting from 2018 is an improvement because my techniques improved, or if its an improvement because its a completely different composition.
This year, I decided to honor the original composition more Thani did last year, and placed an emphasis on the lighting. I wanted the lighting to be accurate to the time of day. That meant, less saturated colors, less value contrast, and fewer bright highlights.
Im not all that happy with the results, but this feels like its my own because it isnt just repurposing a tutorial of someone elses techniques. Perhaps this isnt as good as the painting from a year ago, but its more honest, and I think its a better reflection of the source material. Anyway, Ill let you be the judge. Heres the painting of the farm road from the end of Year Two:

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